Story, Mary. "Fast food restaurant Use among
Adolescenst: Associantions with Nutrient Intake, Food Choices and Behavioral
and Psychosocial Variables." International Journal of Obesity
(2001): 1824-1831. Web. 8 Apr. 2014.
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The author
of this article has a written many others like it. She has a long list of
articles talking about obesity and the way it effects the body and the children
in today’s world. The content in this article is mainly focused on the results
that were collected from the studies that were collected from schools and talks
about how the data is portrayed. The main argument of this article is to show
how big of a difference is made when children eat healthy food compared to when
they do not. Energy and attention are the main points that are highlighted. The
intended audience for this article is parents that have children and buy their
kids fast food. The research methods were surveys that were taken from
thirty-one schools with kids ranging from seventh to twelfth grade. The author
found that kids who eat fast food on a regular basis are more likely to become
obese and have less energy and concentration because they are not receiving the
necessary nutrients. This text is extremely reliable because the results were
taken from real kids who were not asked to change their eating habits and the
study was conducted by a group of professors from the University of Minnesota.
A really important part of this article was the charts that were provided
showing the data from the survey. The strengths of the text are the charts and
seeing how the surveys were conducted. As of weaknesses in the article there
are not any because everything in the article serves a purpose and without it
some of the information would not be as complete.
This
article is helpful to my own research because it helps me see what the
difference is between eating healthy compared to eating fast food. Seeing that
fast food decreases the body’s energy is a huge step forward for my research
and the charts help me see where improvements can be made. My reaction to the
text was shocking. Seeing how big of a difference eating fast food makes was
astonishing and now I realize that there are so many disadvantages to eating
fast food that I did not see before.
Bowman, Shanthy. "Effects of Fast-Food Consumption on
Energy Intake and Diet Quality Among Children in a National Household
Survey." Pediatrics. N.p., n.d. Web. 8 Apr. 2014.
The author
of this text is a doctor who does research for a website called pediatrics.org.
She is a nutritionist and scientist for the USDA and holds a
Ph.D. The content of this article is holds many statistics and data. The
article looks at results from eating fast food and how it affects the body. The
main argument of this article is how the consumption of fast food among
children can cause an increase in children obesity. The intended audience is
parents with children and parents who feed their kids fast food. The methods
used to find this data was to run a survey with kids from the ages of four to
nineteen and to ask them to keep their eating habits the same. The conclusions
that were found were that kids who ate fast food were that kids who ate fast
food had less energy. The reliability of this text is high. Being that the
person who wrote it works for the USDA, they would not put inaccurate
information in a public pediatric article. The highlight of this article was
seeing the numbers in energy between kids who ate fast food and kids who did
not. The strengths of this article was seeing the energy difference in numbers
but the weakness of it was that the survey was only done for two days and the
participants were only reviewed on one of the two days.
This
article helps me with my research because I can now see the real numbers in
energy difference. I can look at the difference from a two-day survey compared
to a longer survey that I found in a different piece of research. I was
surprised to see how the numbers change from healthy eating children and
unhealthy eating children. The difference between fiber, energy, and confidence
interval were completely different.
Matt,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very thorough and informative annotated bib. My only criticism is that there are multiple mechanical errors here.
Also, I am hoping that your OTHER group members are finding DIFFERING arguments with respect to your research topic?
Lastly, have you seen the movie "Super Size Me?" That might - though I don't know if it talks about kids - be helpful as well (and could count as one of your group's 8 sources).
16/18 pts